Question

急求一篇有些难度的英文自我介绍，谢谢啦，要求一分钟，大家帮忙扩充一些，大学口语考试。

我英文名Monica，20岁，喜欢唱歌跳舞，个性乐观，做事理性，随了爸爸的性格，对人相当宽容，没脾气，小时候希望当歌星，长了了理想也现实了很多，未来想做一名婚礼策划师，个人格言，是做快乐的自己。爱好唱歌，但是不追星，只是欣赏那些优秀的歌手，但一直很喜欢李宇春，从七年前看到她干净的笑容开始，一直都对笑容纯净阳光的人很有好感。剩下的大家帮忙扩充下。

Answer 1

Hello,everyone! Today, It's my honor to stand here to do a self introduction. I am Monica,a 20-year-old girl who is outgoing and rational. My character is similar with my father's. I am tolerance with people and have got no temper. I would like to be a singer when I was a little girl. My dream has changed with the years went by. And now I'd like to be a wedding planner. My Personal motto is to be myself happily. I am fond of singing, however, I do not make track for a star. I just admire some nice singers,such as 李宇春.（剩下那句写上收不了尾了，楼主见谅）In a word,I am such a girl who like art. If you like me, be my friends please! That's all, thank you.
PS:我寝室长超爱李宇春，她出道来所有专辑她都有~翻译着自我介绍很激动！

Answer 2

My English name Monica, 20 years old, like singing and dancing, optimistic personality, things rational, with the character of the father, fairly tolerant of people, no temper, childhood hope that the singers, the ideal reality, the future want toa wedding planner, personal motto is happy to do. Loving to sing, but not star-chasing, and just enjoy good singer, but always liked Li began seven years ago to see her clean smile, people smile pure sunshine has been very good impression. Remaining to help expand.

追问

怎么有的连谓语动词都没有啊，不成句子呢，谢谢啊

追答

哦