Question

英语短文改错题。10处错误。在线等。

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid waLast weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done.I hope everyone can give hand when someone else is in need.

Answer 1

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更正一楼两处改正！

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as (usually改成usual). At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake (while改成when) suddenly I (hear改成heard) someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was (shocking改成shocked) to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many (peoples改成people) were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I (去掉had) pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, (but改成and) jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To (his改成my) great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud (加入of) what I had done. I hope everyone can give (加入a) hand when someone else is in need.

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Answer 2

1 usually改为usual
2.hear 改为heard
3.happening改为happened
4.shocking 改为shocked
5.peoples 改为people
6.jumped前面的but改为 and
7.To his great relief中的his改为my
8.proud后面加上of
9.had done改为have done
10.give hand中间加a
希望帮到你

Answer 3

suddenly I hear someone 此处加is crying for help
.I was shocking to find a little child ，shocking改成shocked.
many peoples 去s,
but jumped into the water quickly,but改成and,
To his great relief,his改成 my
give hand,改成give a hand，这才是帮助的意思！
其他的我暂时想不起来