短文改错Helen was in her twenty and her eyes were not that well,共10处错误

Helenwasinhertwentyandhereyeswerenorthatwell.Thatwasbeacusesheusuallyworeglasses.Howe... Helen was in her twenty and her eyes were nor that well. That was beacuse she usually wore glasses. However, every time when she went out with a young man, she never wore her glasses. Helen ofent takes her glasses off when he came to take her out. When she came home again and he left, she put it on. Full of curiosity, her mother said one day,''Why not to were your glasses when you with Jim? He takes you ro beautiful places by his car, but you can't see anything clearly." "Oh," said Helen, "without glasses I look prettier to Jim and he looks better to me either." 展开
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Helen was in her (twenty改成twenties) and her eyes were not that (well改成good). That was (beacuse改成why) she usually wore glasses. However, every time (去掉when) she went out with a young man, she never wore her glasses. Helen often (takes改成took) her glasses off when he came to take her out. When she came home again and he left, she put (it改成them) on. Full of curiosity, her mother said one day, ''Why not (去掉to) wear your glasses when you (加入are) with Jim? He takes you to beautiful places (by his去掉his 或 by his改成in his) car, but you can't see anything clearly." "Oh," said Helen, "without glasses I look prettier to Jim and he looks better to me (either改成too)."

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Helen was in her twenty(改为twenties) and(改为but) her eyes were nor(not) that well(改为good). That was beacuse she usually wore glasses. However, every time when(when去掉) she went out with a young man, she never wore her glasses. Helen ofent takes(改为took) her glasses off when he came to take her out. When she came home again and he left, she put it on. Full of curiosity, her mother said one day,''Why not to(去掉to) were your glasses when you (加上are)with Jim? He takes you ro beautiful places by his(去掉his或把by改为in) car, but you can't see anything clearly." "Oh," said Helen, "without glasses I look prettier to Jim and he looks better to me either.(改为too)"
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with a young man, she never wore her glasses. Helen ofent takes her glasses off when he came to take her
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Helen was in her twenty (TWENTIES) and her eyes were nor (NOT) that well (GOOD). That was beacuse (WHY) she usually wore glasses. However, every time when she went out with a young man, she never wore her glasses. Helen ofent takes (TOOK OFF) her glasses when he came to take her out. When she came home again and (AFTER) he left, she put it on. Full of curiosity, her mother said one day,''Why not to were (DON'T YOU WEAR) your glasses when you (add "ARE") with Jim? He takes you ro (TO) beautiful places by his car, but you can't see anything clearly." "Oh," said Helen, "without glasses I look prettier to Jim and he looks better to me either (TOO or simply delete "EITHER")."
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