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During the winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked there for a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was bored and seemed endless, and it made me such tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late into the night. I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not go to that restaurant any more, but I insisted I should go. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term began. Although I didn’t earn much money, I am very happy. I think it was really a successful experience, that I should remember for ever.

Answer 1

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During the winter vacation, I did something (differently改成different). I got a job at a restaurant and worked there (for改成as) a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was (bored改成boring) and seemed endless, and it made me (such改成so) tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got (去掉to) home late into the night. I felt exhausted (but改成and) couldn’t (fell改成fall) asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not go to that restaurant any more, but I insisted I should go. Finally, I finished (a改成the) job before the new school term began. Although I didn’t earn much money, I am very happy. I think it (was改成is) really a successful experience, (that改成which) I should remember for ever.

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Answer 2

During the winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked
different
there for a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was bored and seemed
as boring
endless, and it made me such tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for
so off去掉
work early in the morning and got to home late into the night. I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell
got变 went fall
asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not go to that restaurant any more,
加to
but I insisted I should go. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term began. Although I
a变the
didn’t earn much money, I am very happy. I think it was really a successful experience, that I
am变was
should remember for ever.

Answer 3

改的不多，总体来说写的不错。
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During the winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was boring and seemed endless, and it made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late into the night. I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not to go to that restaurant any more, but I insisted that I should go. Finally, I finished the job before the new school term began. Although I didn’t earn much money, I was very happy. I think it was really a successful experience that I should remember for ever.

Answer 4

During winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked
different
there for a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was bored and seemed
as boring
endless, and it made me such tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for
so off去掉
work early in the morning and got to home late into the night. I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell
got变 went fall
asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not go to that restaurant any more,
加to
but I insisted I should go. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term began. Although I

didn’t earn much money, I am very happy. I think it was really a successful experience, that I
变wa
During the winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was boring and seemed endless, and it made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late into the night. I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not to go to that restaurant any more, but I insisted that I should go. Finally, I finished the job before the new school term began. Although I didn’t earn much money, I was very happy. I think it was really a successful experience that I should remember for