Question

急需高人指教两句商务英语翻译！

中文：对不起，我们不能退货或退款。但在一周内，如果产品出现非人为造成的故障或问题我们可以为您调换同类产品。翻译成下面的英文是否地道、得体。请多多指教！
英文：We are really very sorry that we can't make the return or refund for you. But we can exchange the product with same types you like if it comes out unartifacial faults or problems within one week.

Answer 1

We feel very sorry that we cannot make the goods or funds returned. But we can exchange the like products if there comes the nonartificial faults or problems within one week.

追问

Thank you very much for your reply. What do you think of my translation, is it easily understood? or what should I pay more attention to the like translation about Business English? Looking forward to you early reply once more!

追答

It's really ok with your translation if more genuine .Additionally,u are suppoed to read more articles about Commerce English to enhance the form of practicing writing and more english originals to be familiar with the idiomatic words and expressions。

追问

Would you please recommand some related books, webs or materials with Commerce English.
You can inform me through qq:1084101072. I am appreciated with your help! many thanks.

追答

What a pity,i donot have related resources as i donot major in or work on this.

Answer 2

I‘m sorry but we are not accepting return of goods or refund. On condition that problems occur beyond control within one week, we will exchange for similar products to reduce loss for you.

Answer 3

we are terribly sorry but returned purchase and refund are not afforded except the unexpectd circumstance of unartifacial faults under which the exchange of product is available within a week.

追问

Thanks for your specialised translation. I have question wether "afford" is suitable using here; it means "have no enough money to pay for sth", but here emphasizes "no duty to return the money". Looking for your further explanation!

Answer 4

应该不错啦~意思一样