Question

高中英语短文改错----高手帮忙

短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。没处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I
was having trouble getting along with my parents. I had about fifty dollars in their pockets,
so I thought about leaving home. It spent me only two weeks away from home while I started
to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons:
being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to
deal with my duties without told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to
give me their advices. In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules
for me to follow.

Answer 1

The first time I decide to leave home was that when I was upon graduation in high school. I
was having trouble and getting along with my parents. I had gotten about fifty dollars from their pockets,
so I thought about leaving home. It spent me only two weeks leave home while I started
to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons:
being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because I’m on my own, I get to
deal with my duties without told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to
give me their advices. In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules
for me to follow.
改好了

Answer 2

decided
I had got about fifty dollars in their pockets
then I thought about leaving home
It cost me only two weeks away from home when I started to feel homesick.
Because I’m on my own,
I have to deal with my duties without being told
give me their advice
on the other hand