请英语好的同学帮我看一下吧,这是一道 短文改错题 好的话我会额外加分的!急急急急急急!!

Oneafternoon,whileIwasdoingmyhomework,suddenly1.________Iheardsomeonekonckingatthedoo... One afternoon,while I was doing my homework , suddenly 1.________
I heard someone koncking at the door . I rose my head , looking 2.________
out of the window to see who it was . The man of about 50 with 3.________
broad shoulders and glasses were standing on the door steps . 4.________
He was tall , wearing in an old army coat . He grew a wild beard 5.________
A big black hat was pulling forward over his eyes so that it was 6.________
hard to see his face clear . His shoes were old and worn out . 7.________
It was a big hole in one of his socks . He had with him a black 8.________
box in one hand . Only after I took a few more closer look at 9.________
him I recognize that he used to be my neighbor ten years ago . 10.________
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1. √ 2. rose→raised rais的过去式写错了
3 The→A 一个人,因为刚出现 4. were→was 单数,主语是这个人。 5 去掉in ,wear是及物动词
6. pulling→pulled 表示被动 7 clear→clearly 动词后面跟副词 8 It→There 表示有用There 9. look→looks looks为可说名词
10. him后加did
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2:raise --->raised
3:of后面加whom; 定语从句
4:were改成was; 单三
5:grew 改成has,
6:pulling改为pulled. 被动语态
7:clear改成clearly
8:It was 改为there was :即某处有某物
9:closer后面加to
10:him后面加did.Only放句首需要部分倒装
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1. √ 2. rose→raised 3. of后面加whom; 定语从句
4. were→was 5 .去掉in ,wear是及物动词
6. pulling→pulled 表示被动 7. clear→clearly 8. It→There 9.closer→closely10. him后加did
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