Question

请问怎么翻译，谢谢

Hello lfan1861:

I am an Englishtown writing teacher. I read and corrected your writing. I hope you will find the corrections helpful. Please keep up the good work.

Topic:You've selected the items available and now are at the online check out. Send a text message to your friend to see if they want you to buy the items for them. Type into the input box. When you're finished, click 'Submit.' Write 20-40 words.

Your writing with Corrections

The online catalog has a (D)(>>)white sneakers (MW)(>>for )seventy-nine dollars,(I(x))(>> )a white T-shirt (MW)(>>for )thirty dollars,a (D)(>>)black shoes (MW)(>>for )fifty-nine dollars,(I(x))(>> )a pink shirt (MW)(>>for )sixty-nine dollars,a (D)(>>)belts (MW)(>>for )twenty-nine dollars,a (D)(>>)brown pants (MW)(>>for )thirty-nineand(SP)(>>nine and) nine-nine dollars and a blue shirt (MW)(>>for )thirty dollars.

For the editing marks that I used show an incorrect word or phrase, please refer to the list at the end of this document

Overall Teacher Comments

Your grammar and sentences are well-structured and I can see that you are careful with your English. Well done.

There are always spaces between words and following a comma, number, or any other punctuation.

'For' is used to show an amount of money.

I look forward to seeing you progress with your English studies. Please make use of the Grammar Lab that EF provides for extra help.
Good luck.
L.F.

Writing Grade:90

Answer 1

Hello lfan1861:
你好，

I am an Englishtown writing teacher. I read and corrected your writing. I hope you will find the corrections helpful. Please keep up the good work.
我是Englishtown的写作老师。我读了你的作文并且做了修改。我希望你能觉得这些修改对你有所帮助。写的很好请继续保持。

Topic:You've selected the items available and now are at the online check out. Send a text message to your friend to see if they want you to buy the items for them. Type into the input box. When you're finished, click 'Submit.' Write 20-40 words.
话题：你已经很好的选择了有用的项目，并在线登录。给你的朋友发一天

Your writing with Corrections
修改后的你的作文

The online catalog has a (D)(>>)white sneakers (MW)(>>for )seventy-nine dollars,(I(x))(>> )a white T-shirt (MW)(>>for )thirty dollars,a (D)(>>)black shoes (MW)(>>for )fifty-nine dollars,(I(x))(>> )a pink shirt (MW)(>>for )sixty-nine dollars,a (D)(>>)belts (MW)(>>for )twenty-nine dollars,a (D)(>>)brown pants (MW)(>>for )thirty-nineand(SP)(>>nine and) nine-nine dollars and a blue shirt (MW)(>>for )thirty dollars.

For the editing marks that I used show an incorrect word or phrase, please refer to the list at the end of this document
我编辑的标记都是在一些错误的单词或词组上，请参考这篇文件后面的列表。（以方便理解老师所做标记的意思。）

Overall Teacher Comments

Your grammar and sentences are well-structured and I can see that you are careful with your English. Well done.
你的语法和句子结构都很好，而且我能看到你写英文作文很仔细。干的漂亮。
There are always spaces between words and following a comma, number, or any other punctuation.
在单词之间总是需要有一个空档，然后是一个逗号，数字或者是别的符号。
'For' is used to show an amount of money.
For 是用来表示钱的数目的。

I look forward to seeing you progress with your English studies. Please make use of the Grammar Lab that EF provides for extra help.
Good luck.
我期盼见到你英语学习上不断进步，请充分利用EF语法室给你提供的额外帮助。
L.F.
Writing Grade:90
写作成绩：90分

Answer 2

Ifan 1861 你好：
我是Englishtown的英语写作老师，我拜读并修改了你的作文，我希望所修改之处会对你有所帮助。你的作文写得很棒，请继续努力。
话题：你已选定了可用的物品，现可网购。给你的朋友发个短信问问他们是否想要你替他们购买。键入框格内，完成后，点击“提交”，写20-40个词。
经我修改过的作文。
在出错的词或短语处我使用了批改标记，标记代表的意思请参阅文档后面列表。
老师对你的作文总体评价：
语法及句子结构完整合理，由此可见你对英语学习的认真，很好！
注意英语词与词之间的空格，还要注意词后面所使用的逗号，数字及其他标点符号。
"For"在此表示所需钱的数目。
望你今后英语学习不断进步，你可充分利用EF语法实验室提供的更多帮助。
此致 顺利！
L.F.
你的作文评分：90