Question

英语短文改错

Dear Mary,
I an Senior 3 student ,I'm going t o take part in this summer's college entrance examination,In preparation for it,I am studying very hard.As a result ,I often feel exhausting both physically and mentally,Therefore,my parents still put a lot of pressure is too heavy for me not to cope with,I attempted to communicating with them ,but failed.
Now I quite upset about ,How can my parents understand us? I really about know how to do,Could you please give me some advices?
Cooking forward to your reply.

XX

Answer 1

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Dear Mary,
I'm (an改成a) Senior 3 student, I'm going to take part in this summer's college entrance examination, In preparation for it, I am studying very hard. As a result, I often feel (exhausting改成exhausted) both physically and mentally, (Therefore改成However), my parents still put a lot of pressure (加入which/that) is too heavy for me (去掉not) to cope with, I attempted to (communicating改成communicate) with them, but failed.
Now I'm quite upset about it, How can my parents understand (us改成me)? I really don't know (how改成what) to do, Could you please give me some (advices改成advice)?
(Looking改成Look) forward to your reply.

XX

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Answer 2

a Senior
I often feel exhausted
However, my parents
which is too heavy for me to cope with
I atrtempted to communicate
Now I am quite upset. How can my parents understand me?
I really want to know what to do
Could you please give me some advice?
Looking forward to your reply.

Answer 3

Dear Mary,

I'm a senior 3 student. I'm going to take part in the college entrance examination this summer. I am now working very hard for the preparation. As a result, I often fell exhausting both physically and mentally. However, my parents still put a lot of pressure to me. Sometimes I think it is too heavy for me to cope with. Though I tried to communicate with them, but they never listen to me.

Now I'm quite upset. How could it possible for our parents to understand us? I do not know what to do. Could you please give me some advises?

Looking forward to your reply.

Sincere,
XX

P.S. 孩子，中国就是hard模式，get used to it！