英语短文改错

DearMary,IanSenior3student,I'mgoingtotakepartinthissummer'scollegeentranceexamination... Dear Mary,
I an Senior 3 student ,I'm going t o take part in this summer's college entrance examination,In preparation for it,I am studying very hard.As a result ,I often feel exhausting both physically and mentally,Therefore,my parents still put a lot of pressure is too heavy for me not to cope with,I attempted to communicating with them ,but failed.
Now I quite upset about ,How can my parents understand us? I really about know how to do,Could you please give me some advices?
Cooking forward to your reply.

XX
展开
巧手成妈妈
高粉答主

2012-04-18 · 每个回答都超有意思的
知道大有可为答主
回答量:3.4万
采纳率:86%
帮助的人:2.1亿
展开全部
更正在括号处标明,总共十处错误,并更正了楼主若干打字错误,保证准确率!

Dear Mary,
I'm (an改成a) Senior 3 student, I'm going to take part in this summer's college entrance examination, In preparation for it, I am studying very hard. As a result, I often feel (exhausting改成exhausted) both physically and mentally, (Therefore改成However), my parents still put a lot of pressure (加入which/that) is too heavy for me (去掉not) to cope with, I attempted to (communicating改成communicate) with them, but failed.
Now I'm quite upset about it, How can my parents understand (us改成me)? I really don't know (how改成what) to do, Could you please give me some (advices改成advice)?
(Looking改成Look) forward to your reply.

XX

如果你满意我的答案,敬请采纳,这是对我们答题者劳动的尊重,多谢!

参考资料: 英语牛人团

sarspatient
2012-04-18 · TA获得超过4834个赞
知道大有可为答主
回答量:3551
采纳率:88%
帮助的人:2309万
展开全部
a Senior
I often feel exhausted
However, my parents
which is too heavy for me to cope with
I atrtempted to communicate
Now I am quite upset. How can my parents understand me?
I really want to know what to do
Could you please give me some advice?
Looking forward to your reply.
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
ran0607
2012-04-18 · TA获得超过398个赞
知道小有建树答主
回答量:607
采纳率:0%
帮助的人:460万
展开全部
Dear Mary,

I'm a senior 3 student. I'm going to take part in the college entrance examination this summer. I am now working very hard for the preparation. As a result, I often fell exhausting both physically and mentally. However, my parents still put a lot of pressure to me. Sometimes I think it is too heavy for me to cope with. Though I tried to communicate with them, but they never listen to me.

Now I'm quite upset. How could it possible for our parents to understand us? I do not know what to do. Could you please give me some advises?

Looking forward to your reply.

Sincere,
XX

P.S. 孩子,中国就是hard模式,get used to it!
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
收起 更多回答(1)
推荐律师服务: 若未解决您的问题,请您详细描述您的问题,通过百度律临进行免费专业咨询

为你推荐:

下载百度知道APP,抢鲜体验
使用百度知道APP,立即抢鲜体验。你的手机镜头里或许有别人想知道的答案。
扫描二维码下载
×

类别

我们会通过消息、邮箱等方式尽快将举报结果通知您。

说明

0/200

提交
取消

辅 助

模 式