Question

英语翻译+句子结构分析

Now you have raw materials that you can begin to work with using the critical mind that you've persuaded to sit on the side and watch quietly.
句子结构分析下，再翻译下

Answer 1

现在你有了原材料，这样你就可以运用你的批判性思维来工作了，而这种批判性思维会让你坐在边上并且安静地观看。
①【Now you have raw materials that you can begin to work with using the critical mind】 that you've persuaded to sit on the side and watch quietly
这是一个宾语从句，从句部分为that you can begin to work with using the critical mind】 that you've persuaded to sit on the side and watch quietly
②Now you have raw materials that you can begin to work with using 【the critical mind that you've persuaded to sit on the side and watch quietly】
这是一个定语从句，先行词是mind，that作连接，从句部分是you've persuaded to sit on the side and watch quietly，mind在从句中作宾语(you've persuaded [the critical mind] to sit on…)

Answer 2

现在你有了原材料，可以用来开始你的工作了，运用批判性思维说服你坐在一边安静地看。

全句可分成两个复合句
Now you have raw materials that you can begin to work with，using the critical mind that you've persuaded to sit on the side and watch quietly