Question

来个英语好点的，帮忙这一片作文，求急急急！100字左右

100字左右
英语作文。
假如你是刘芳，你的笔友Simon最近沉湎于电脑游戏，为此你很担心。根据下表提示给Simon写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。
Simon的过去
功课好，积极参加学校各项活动

Simon的现在
对学习没有兴趣，上课不专心，不按时交作业

你的建议 （至少发挥两点）100字左右
『求人帮忙』

Answer 1

Dear Simon,

I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don’t listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can’t hand in your homework in time.

Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may do harm to your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and neck.

I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join some outdoor activities when you feel bored? As your friend, I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness.

Best wishes

Liu Fang

Answer 2

Dear Simon,

I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don’t listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can’t hand in your homework in time.

Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may do harm to your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and neck.

I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join some outdoor activities when you feel bored? As your friend, I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness.

Best wishes

Liu Fang
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