Question

请帮我改改翻译，是帮我该，看看我要怎么纠正错误！请不要直接自己翻译的！ 谢谢啦~~

1. 杰克给了我一个坚定的眼神，这眼神表明他不会改变主意，也不会屈服。
(determined, change one’s mind, give in)
Jack gives me a determined looking , which means he never change his mind and never give in .（这句时态到底怎么用啊）
2. 约翰，想办法把这房间整理好。(think of, get sth done)
John , thinking of measures to get the room done.
3. 他不停劝说我，如果我去旅游，让他相陪。(persuade, company)
He often persuaded me with his company if I will go travel
4. 尽管她并不喜欢画，她却坚持要和我一起去看画展。(be fond of, insist)
She insists on going to the drawing display , though she dosen’t like drawings.
5. 花了一周时间才把衣物和药品送达灾区。(transport运输)
It takes us one week time that transport the clothes and medicine arrival at the stricken region .
6. 我们以为保罗是一个可信赖的人，但实际上他只关心他自己。(reliable, care about)
We consider that Paul is a reliable man , however he is care about himself only .
7. 首先想到沿着河流从源头到终点骑车旅游的是你的表姐。(强调句)
It was the first one that your sister considered we can travel by bike from beginning to ending of the river.
8. 由于他的车损坏了，他获得了1000元的保险费。(insurance)
Because of his broken bike that he has got 1000 Yuan insurance.（这题可以用非谓语吗？不懂！）
9. 我妹妹很固执，她根本听不进别人的意见。(stubborn)
My sister was really stubborn , she never heard about others advices.
10. 请耐心点。火车十分钟后到。(be doing 表将来)
Please pay attention , the train is arrivalling 10 minutes later.

Answer 1

1changes
2think就行了，think of a way to put the room in order
3用从句啊，persuade sb that,还有不停，不是often，用其他的，
后面的也错，if引导条件句你的不符合
4art exhibition画展，drawing不加s
5it takes sb some time to do还有注意时态
6有is care about吗，还有注意often位置，时态
7强调句还是不熟啊，强调your sister啊，而且我记得这是高中课文的
8时态要注意，用完成时不好，还有不要加that。非谓语with his bike broken.....
9听取意见，listen to opinions
10is coming多好，