Question

初三英语作文。假设你是九年级学生，给某英语报的编辑写一封书信，诉说你的烦恼，并请求帮助。内容如下。

1，英语学习有困难，不知道如何学好。
2，在家父母不允许看电视，听音乐
3，近来与同学相处不好
4，不久就要升入高中学习，听说高中科目很难，感到焦急
词数80个词，开头是 I am LiMing,a student of Grade Nine.I am writing to tell you about my trouble....
语法简单，希望准确一点。

Answer 1

I am LiMing,a student of Grade Nine.I am writing to tell you about my trouble....
The first is that I have some trouble in my English studing,I don't know how to learn well.Secon,my parent don't allow me watching TV and lisenning music at home.Third,I didn't get along well with my classmates recently.The last one is that as I am going to be a high school student ,I feel nevous hearing the hard schoolwork.I hope I could get your help as soon as possible.Thank you!

追问

有些错误哦。。。

追答

不好意思，很久没碰英语了，能告诉我哪里错了吗

追问

second拼错了。第三行的parent一般要加s吧。还有allow加人是用动词不定式吧。

追答

受教了，考完六级后就没接触了，都忘了，O(∩_∩)O谢谢

Answer 2

绝对原创，本人新托福104。我尽量考虑你的实际需要哈。
Dear editor,
i am LiMing,a student of Grade Nine. I am writing to tell you about my trouble.
i found it a little bit difficult in studying English these days, i have strived to make some improvements but it seems dose not work out very well. i hardly have any ideas about it. What's worse, my parents do not allow me enjoy TV or music in our apartment, it makes me somehow upset and hence i cannot get along well with my classmates recently.
i am going to start learning in senior high school and i hear(ed) that the subjects would be very tough . i really feel worried about this.
i am looking forword to your advice. Thank you!
yours sincerely,
XXXXXXX

Answer 3

听拼错了。是listening 不用双写n.