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WhyisitimortpanttolearnEnglishforyourfuturecareerI'llbegraduatingfromhighschool，right...
Why is it imortpant to learn English for your future career
I'll be graduating from high school，right now,I am facing to walk out my first step toward the future career.Obviously,English plays an important role as a popular language in the word. Especially, nowadays,China is confronted with unprecedented rapid dexelopment in China.Thus,English becomes most important communication tool.Therefore,to master English may increase my competitiveness in job hunting process in the near future.
As I known,the effective menthod to learn a language is to live that country.After careful consideration,Idecided to study abroad ,and I put the United Dtates of America ad my destination for it’a cademic, cultures,and so on. I definitely believe that no matter which field I’ll ioin in the future,the overseas study experiences would benefit me a lot in my future career.
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I'll be graduating from high school，right now,I am facing to walk out my first step toward the future career.Obviously,English plays an important role as a popular language in the word. Especially, nowadays,China is confronted with unprecedented rapid dexelopment in China.Thus,English becomes most important communication tool.Therefore,to master English may increase my competitiveness in job hunting process in the near future.
As I known,the effective menthod to learn a language is to live that country.After careful consideration,Idecided to study abroad ,and I put the United Dtates of America ad my destination for it’a cademic, cultures,and so on. I definitely believe that no matter which field I’ll ioin in the future,the overseas study experiences would benefit me a lot in my future career.
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Why it is important for our future to learing English well.(你下面写的是自己，上面不能用第二人称，谓语从句运用不正确)
I m going to graduate from high school（没有正在毕业一说= =）.So here will be a great step forward .(病句，主语不明确)Obviously,English plays an important role in popular languages world，（语义不明，亲，你是想说英语在通用外语中很重要，还是英语是一个重要的通行外语= =） especially China is confronted（meaning？） with unprecedented rapid dexelopment today.（语义大大的不明啊上句，没法子改都，不过不管如何在句意上这句应和上句有从属关系，因此不能再开一句。）So English was became the most important communication tool.（thus 用法有误，与语义不和，英语已经变成，应用过去式，比较级的最高级前加the）Therefore,to master（meaning？） English may increase（增加，增长？怎么能用这个词？时态应用现在进行时） my competitiveness for hunting a job process in the near（接近与未来能连用么？） future. ……
几乎每句都有一定的问题，如果这篇文章很重要，找老师辅导你写一下吧= =
Why it is important for our future to learing English well.(你下面写的是自己，上面不能用第二人称，谓语从句运用不正确)
I m going to graduate from high school（没有正在毕业一说= =）.So here will be a great step forward .(病句，主语不明确)Obviously,English plays an important role in popular languages world，（语义不明，亲，你是想说英语在通用外语中很重要，还是英语是一个重要的通行外语= =） especially China is confronted（meaning？） with unprecedented rapid dexelopment today.（语义大大的不明啊上句，没法子改都，不过不管如何在句意上这句应和上句有从属关系，因此不能再开一句。）So English was became the most important communication tool.（thus 用法有误，与语义不和，英语已经变成，应用过去式，比较级的最高级前加the）Therefore,to master（meaning？） English may increase（增加，增长？怎么能用这个词？时态应用现在进行时） my competitiveness for hunting a job process in the near（接近与未来能连用么？） future. ……
几乎每句都有一定的问题，如果这篇文章很重要，找老师辅导你写一下吧= =
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