Question

写英语作文 I have a dream （我有一个个梦想）

Answer 1

Everyone has his dreams,some of them dream of becoming a teacher,others a doctor,or a policeman.but I have a another kind of dream. My dream is a nice dream,in my dream, I am an angel, I have a pair of wings,so i can fly! I can fly high in the sky.in the sky, I can see beautiful clouds, I can see people and houses down on the earth moving up and down, I can see the great wall and other places of interests. I am a angel, so I can make many things come true with my power. I can help poor children come to school and I can make the blind able to see the world! I am an angel so I don't have to do my homework and I don't have to play the piano.

希望能帮到你，祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O
有不会的欢迎再继续问我(*^__^*)

Answer 2

不得不说，这篇文章还是有很多错误的。比如说 Great Wall 长城。是必须要开头大写的，且有很多的都没有大写。还有angel天使是元音发音没错，前面你注意了用了an，可是后面却没有，要注意的地方还很多。