Question

谁帮忙写一篇英语短文

6月9日是你的生日，你计划举行一个party，你邀请了（invite）你最好的朋友Judy来参加。那天，Judy 给你带来一件礼物。这件礼物是一个蓝色的MP4，9厘米长，6厘米宽，用来听音乐和学英语，你非常喜欢它。请根据提示写一篇70个词左右的短文。

Answer 1

初一的么，也才学了几个时态，定于从句没学到，不过过去分词，现在分词，不定式涉及到了。当然是7A，7B都在里面渣漏。
我正好在教初一，你看下：
My birthday is on 9th, June. I held a party and invited my best friend Judy to the party. On that day, Judy took a present to me. It is a MP4. It is 9 centimeters long and 6 centimeters wide. I often use it to listen to the music and learn English. I like it very much.
你尽量把自己所学的知识用上，如果你不会写长句子，尽量就不要写，因为错的话会扣分薯梁物的。短句子简单而数液且不容易出错，虽然拿不了太高分，但是及格是肯定没问题的。

Answer 2

On the last June 9th , which was my birthday ,I held an birthday party inviting many friends including my best friend Judy ,who got me a 9cm-long 6cm-wide blue MP4,which was meant to help me practice my English listening skills and get some relief from music.I liked it very much.Till now ,It is still in my pocket ,for which is the witness of our constant friendship.

追问

好复杂，能不能简单一点，我只是一名初一学生啊

追答

不复杂，这是很简单的，只是生词多，从句也就几个。我写作文时，整个段落都是从句，从句中夹杂从句，那才复杂。

Answer 3

My birthday was on 9th,June and I held a party. I invited Judy, my best friend, to enjoy the party. On that day, she brought me a gift, a blue MP4. It is 4.9cm long and 6cm wide. I can use it to listen to music and study English. It is a very good gift, and I like it very much.
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唔，也不知道初中学了定语从句什么的了，陪瞎姑且这么写着吧。。。嘿嘿。。希望对芦物空你有蚂汪帮助哦~

Answer 4

初中要好好爱基础啊，不能靠这个啊