Question

急！！！哪位英语真正的高手帮我把这段话的意思表达方式修改好，在线等！

Though our country has carried on economic system reform, but there is so much incompatibility and substandard place from the demand of the market economy. The defect exists in the economic system, all these reforms to our country have produced resistance further, and also restricted the development of economy at the same time. Especially there still exists some conformity with multilateral trade system of World Trade Organization in foreign trade, for example: the profit of the market, quota of the import license, foreign capitals, foreign exchange management etc., the opening of the service field is still far from enough, the protection of the intellectual property right needs to expand the range and increase efforts. After joining WTO, we had reformed the management system of the foreign-related business in the organization system frame of World Trade Organization, clear up the policies and regulations of domestic economy, change government's function, it accords with " norm, unify, transparent, high-efficient and service " system framework that require. The review mechanism and trade dispute solve mechanism in trade policy of World Trade Organization restrain the system to all members; they impel our country to reform and improve the external pressure of economic management system and external motive force as soon as
possible.也就是能把句子润色一下，意思能表达得更清晰此！
如果修改得好的话，可以再加分的．
The defect exists in the economic system, all these reforms to our country have produced resistance further,这句话表达不好，有错误，我就不知道如何改正，请帮忙！谢谢！

Answer 1

英语水平有限，帮不上你了，祝你快点找到高手！

Answer 2

尽管我们的国家已经进行了经济体制的改革，但是市场经济的需要仍然有很多的的不和谐和不完善的地方.缺陷存在于经济体制，我们国家所有的改革措施将持续进行，所有的经济发展的束缚也同样存在，尤其存在于世贸组织在国际贸易方面的多边贸易体系，例如，市场的利润，重要许可证配额，夸国资本,跨国贸易管理等。服务领域的数据公开化离远不能满足需求，知识产权的保护的领域需要扩大和加强。加入WTO之后，在世贸组织的组织系统框架中，
先给你这些，我去上趟厕所，一会继续
I am so sorry,I have misunderstand your idea.
你的表达可以说很不错，做为业余选手能翻译到此我已经万分佩服。在这里的高手恐怕对经济类的文章都没有十足把握，如果实在没人帮你翻译的话，我建议你去政府网，找一篇和这个主题类似的，然后切换成英文版，那样更专业一些。
如果是我来说这句话的话，我会这样说：
the economic system have some disadvantage and our reforms also encounter obstacles 。