Question

帮忙写一篇英语作文。字数120~150题目如下： The Most Important Thing I Have Ever Done 要求在下面。

要求提纲：

1. Describe the most important thing you've ever done;

2. Why is it the most important thing to you?

3. What have you learnt from it?
写好的私信给我。如果分数批改出来高的给与加分。

Answer 1

There are many advertisement on T.V. They try to give you a strong impression on the idea, object, service, etc. This can be done by designing the best ad. you have ever seen or the worst. as long as you can remember the designer has done their job.

Thinking back on all the ads I have ever seen, I guess the bost impressive one has to be an channel ad. The advertisement was trying to give me a good impression on a specific channel, in this case, channel 2. All the goods from this ad came down to this, it had a very catchy tune making me sing it all the time, simple but effective title (all 2gether) and interesting graphics (bright and colourful). The plot was simple, a wave of happiness going through everybody, making people laugh and be joyful even in their dreams.This implys that channel 2 would bring happiness to you.

In conclusion, I thought that the channel 2 advertisement was definitely one of the most impressive advertisements I have ever seen, and I would like to see more ads just as excellent on T.V, instead of boring ones wasting my time interrupting my favourite T.V show! There are many trips in my memory,Among them,I never forgot that day when my family made a trip to visit YanDang Mountain in May 1st 2005.It was a fine day that day,when we arrived at the peak of YanDang Mountain,I was charmed by the beautiful landscape and I felt that I was flying in the sky.It gave me the most impressive is not only the charmful landscape attract me,but also my mother and father could spend time making a trip with me although they were always busy. I never forget that day and that trip to YanDang Mountain with my whole family.

Answer 2

sdkfjqafskdajfwj2012-4-23 22:38 rest8680 | 二级
There are many advertisement on T.V. They try to give you a strong impression on the idea, object, service, etc. This can be done by designing the best ad. you have ever seen or the worst. as long as you can remember the designer has done their job.

Thinking back on all the ads I have ever seen, I guess the bost impressive one has to be an channel ad. The advertisement was trying to give me a good impression on a specific channel, in this case, channel 2. All the goods from this ad came down to this, it had a very catchy tune making me sing it all the time, simple but effective title (all 2gether) and interesting graphics (bright and colourful). The plot was simple, a wave of happiness going through everybody, making people laugh and be joyful even in their dreams.This implys that channel 2 would bring happiness to you.

In conclusion, I thought that the channel 2 advertisement was definitely one of the most impressive advertisements I have ever seen, and I would like to see more ads just as excellent on T.V, instead of boring ones wasting my time interrupting my favourite T.V show! There are many trips in my memory,Among them,I never forgot that day when my family made a trip to visit YanDang Mountain in May 1st 2005.It was a fine day that day,when we arrived at the peak of YanDang Mountain,I was charmed by the beautiful landscape and I felt that I was flying in the sky.It gave me the most impressive is not only the charmful landscape attract me,but also my mother and father could spend time making a trip with me although they were always busy. I never forget that day and that trip to YanDang Mountain with my whole family. 赞同0| 评论
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