Question

有语法的错误吗？

Recently, i no power to study,and i feel that my ability of learning was geting worse.
Although, sometime, i will to take the shor time with learning goals, but i just to barely
finished, which has been cut coners. However, i can caught the problem, it is good for me,
because as regards problem, which can make me to change my attutide to slove current situation,
and set up the strong goals. And i believe that where there is a will there is a way.

Answer 1

Recently, i no power （改成energy）to study,and i feel (改成felt)that my ability of learning (改成to learn)was geting worse.
Although, sometime (改成sometimes), i will to take the shor time with learning goals(改成I wil spend a short time setting learning goals), but (去掉but) i (+have) just to barely
finished, which has been cut coners. However, i can caught the problem, it is good for me,
because as regards problem, which can make me to change my attutide to slove current situation,
and set up the strong goals. And i believe that where there is a will there is a way.

改了一半，改不下去了， 根本全是错误，重写吧！

Answer 2

你这是纯“中国式”英语。第二句就有个明显的错误。应该是 i have no power to study.你写的句子中缺少谓语。

Answer 3

很多语法错误~

Answer 4

有！应改为：Recently, I haven't had any energy to study,and I feel that my ability of learning is geting worse. Although I will spend a short time on my learning goals sometimes, I still barely
finish them, .I think I only take the tip of the iceberg, however, I can answer some of the questions. That is good for me.Because solving the problems can make me change my attutide to slove current situation,and set up my strong goals. And I believe that where there is a will there is a way!