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英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Lihua.When I am rea

英语短文改错
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Lihua.When I am reading the advertisement, I was great impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend me to you with hesitation. I am now in the summer holidays and have enough time to work for you.However,I have some caring experiences because I onced looked after my grandma.The most important thing is I am patient and the old in our neighborhood likes chatting with me.If I am admitted,I will devote myself to take care of them. I can read newspapers to let them to learn about some latest affairs. I can do some washing,too.
Looking forward to your early reply.

Answer 1

am 改成was

me 改成 myself

with改成without

去掉the

experiences改成experience

onced改成once

likes改成like

(应该还有三处，希望可以帮到你）

Answer 2

用简单的词/句子，以避免错误:
Dear Sir/Madam,
APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF xxx(职位)

I beg to refer to the above application and your advertisement dated (XXX广告日期)
My name is Lihua. I am a student of XXX (学校名称). I am now on summer holidays.
I am very interested in the job because I have the time and experience to care for the elderly(长者/老年人). Previously I cared for my grandmother. I know how to look after the them with patience and love.
If I am offered the job, I will devote my time and heart to care for them. I will also read newspapers for them so that they will keep up with the current affairs. I can also do washing.
Thank you for your attention and consideration. I look forward to receiving a favorable reply.

Yours faithfully,
Lihua

Answer 3

1. am-was, 2 . great-greatly, 3, me - myself 4, with-without, 5, however-and 6, onced-once 7, likes-like 8, am admitted- were admitted 9, let 不加to

Answer 4

I'm Lihua.When I (am reading)read the advertisement, I was (great)greatly impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend (me)myself to you (with)without hesitation. I am now in the summer holidays and have enough time to work for you.(However)Moreover,I have some caring (experiences)experience because I (onced)once looked after my grandma.The most important thing is I am patient and the old in our neighborhood (likes)like chatting with me.If I am(were) admitted,I will(would) devote myself to (take)taking care of them. I can read (newspapers)newspaper to let them to(/) learn about some latest affairs. I can do some washing,too.
Looking forward to your early（/） reply SOON.

Answer 5

Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Lihua.When I read the advertisement, I was deeply impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend myself to you without hesitation. I am now in the summer holiday and have enough time to work for you.what's more ,I have some caring experience because I once looked after my grandma.The most important thing is I am patient and the old in our neighborhood like chatting with me.If I could be admitted, I will devote myself to taking care of them. I can read newspapers to let them learn about some latest affairs. I can do some washing,too.
Looking forward to your early reply.

Answer 6

great改成greatly
want改成wanted
me改成myself
experience改成experiences
likes改成like
take改成taking
let them to 的to删除
希望能帮到你。