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要写篇英语演讲比赛的发言稿,句子不知道怎么说的地道!希望高人翻译一下,如果有什么好的建议也更是感激不尽

我是大一的学生,比赛题目是我的梦想.

当我在上初中时,就梦想成为一名服装设计师.因为,许多中国人总是在追逐其他国家的流行,

而中国风格的衣服在市面上却少之又少.这并不能说明中国的消费者不爱国,而是中国设计师

设计出来的服装不能迎合大众的口味.如果自己的国民都不爱穿自己国家风格的衣服,中国风

格的衣服又怎么能走向世界呢?所以,从那时起,我开始关注流行杂志,掌握流行讯息,下决心

以后要设计出中国风格的服装,在全世界流行.

上了高中,当我提出要考美院的时候,遭到了家长的反对.最后,我只能做出了妥协,放弃了艺

考.但是,在我看来,这并不代表我放弃了梦想,我依旧在为我的梦想而不懈地努力着.因为我

有这个梦想,所以我才会不断的关注时下流行,保持敏锐的感觉.因为我有这个梦想,我才会学

习素描,为以后学习设计打好基础.因为我有这个梦想,我才会努力学好现在的专业,为我出国

留学做好铺垫.

梦想是我生命中的指明灯,有了它我便不会迷失方向.我始终坚信,机会是留给有准备的人,只要心怀梦想,不断地去积累,就会有收获.

Hello,everyone.I'm May.It's my great honor to be here and share my dream with

you .

As I was a middle school student.I wanted to be a fashion designer. Beacause

many Chinese people always chase the fashion of other countries,while clothes of

Chinese style are rare.That doesn't show that those people are unpatriotic,on

the contray, it is the Chinese designer that cannot design clothes meeting the

consumers. If our Chinese people don't like clothes of our own style ,how are these clothes recognised in the international fashion circle ? So,since then, I began to pay close attention to fashion magzines,collect fashion information,and made up my mind to design popular Chinese style clothes,loved by people all over the world.

When I stepped into junior high school,I told my parents my dream,however, they against.Finally, I gave in compromise,giving up registering for examination of Academy of Arts.But,in my opinion,it didn't represent that I gave up my dream.I was still fighting for my dream persisitantly.Beacause of my dream.I focus on fashion all the time to keep a good taste.Because of my dream, I learn sketch to make a good preparation for my design courses.Because of my dream , I study hard in my major to pave roads for my abroad study.

Dream is like a lamp in my life . I've never missed my direction with it .I always believe that Chance favors only the prepared mind .As long as you have a dream , and accumulate constantly , you will achieve what you deserve . Just do it!

That's all .Thank you!

以上是我想表达的东西 我自己写了一下, 文笔不好 英语也一般般 希望有才的哥哥姐姐能帮帮忙 !!谢谢 如果感觉很好的话 我会加分加分!! 有多少加多少!!
虽说我的英语有待提高,但我也是英语专业的,希望能得到帮助,蹭分的就不要来了,用翻译工具翻的我也看得出

Answer 1

第一段：
“It's my .....and share my dream with you"此句表达意思尚可，但力度不够，不够吸引人。
可改为： It's my great honour to be here today. Yet more importantly, I want to share a dream with all of you, a dream I have had since I was a teenager.

第二段：
Ever since I was in middle school, I have dreamt of being a fashion designer, because I realized that a lot of people in China liked to chase after fashion styles from other countries, while ignored the clothes made by chinese designers. This doesn’t mean those people aren’t patriotic, but it shows that Chinese fashion workers are unable to satisefy the demand of the people of their own country. If a fashion style is even disregarded by its native people, how can it be further recognised by the world? Since then, I have begun to pay close attention to the fashion industry, and aspired to designing popular Chinese styled clothes, loved by not only Chinese, but also people all over the world in the future.
第三段
When I went to senior high school, my plan of entering a university of art and design was disapproved by my parents. Eventually, I made a compromise. Although I did not end up being an art student, I haven't stopped chasing my dream. Because of this dream, I keep in tune with the current fashion styles. Because of this dream, I stay in acute sensation about clothes design. Because of this dream, I choose to learn drawing as a foundation for my future pursue. Because of this dream, I try my best to excel in my academic study, as one day I will go abroad to achieve my dream.
结尾段
Dreams are the light which shines through the dark and prevents me from losing the direction in life. Opportunities are only for those who are prepared. Keep your dreams on and go for it. Someday, you will amaze at what you've got.

That's all I want to say. Thank you for listening.

Answer 2

I am a college freshman, the game on my dream.

When I am in junior high school, dreams of becoming a fashion designer, because many Chinese people are always chasing the prevalence of other countries.

Chinese-style clothes in the market are few and far this does not explain the Chinese consumers are not patriotic, but Chinese designer

Clothing can not be designed to cater to the tastes of the public's own nationals are not wearing the clothes of their own country style, Chinese style

Qualified clothes, how can the world? So, since then, I started to pay attention to the popular magazine, grasp the latest trends, determined

The future to design a Chinese-style clothing, popular in the world.

High school, when I propose to consider the Academy of Fine Arts, was the opposition of the parents, I can only make a compromise, give up the art of

Test, but, in my opinion, this does not mean I give up the dream, I am still in my dreams and make unremitting efforts, because I

This dream, so I will continue to concern popular, maintaining a keen sense because I have this dream, I will learn

Learning sketch, to lay the foundation for future study design. Because I have this dream, I will try to learn a professional now for me to go abroad

Study pave the way.

The dream is a beacon in my life, with which I will not get lost, I always believed that opportunities for those who are prepared, as long as the hearts and dreams, and continue to accumulate, there will be harvest.
顺便说一下，我初三。。。。。。。。

Answer 3

I'm a freshman, competition topic is my dream.

When I was in junior high, he dreams of becoming a fashion designer. Because, many Chinese are always chasing other country pop,

While the Chinese style of clothes in the market is less and less. This is not to say that Chinese consumers are not patriotic, but Chinese designer

The costume design can't cater to popular taste. If you don't love people in their own country style clothes, China Wind

Lattice clothes and how to move toward the world? So, from then on, I began to pay attention to grasp the fashion magazines, fashion information, determined to

To design Chinese style clothing, popular in all over the world.

On the high school, when I suggested to go to art school, the parent object. Finally, I can only make a compromise, to give up art

Test. However, in my opinion, this does not represent me to give up the dream, I am still in my dreams and the tireless efforts. For me

Have a dream, so I will continue to concern nowadays popularity, keep a keen feeling. Because I have this dream, I will study

Study after study design sketch, to lay a good foundation. Because I have this dream, I will work hard to learn the professional now, for me to go abroad

Study abroad to pave the way.

The dream is the lamp of my life, with it I won't lose my way. I always believe that, the opportunity is to those who are prepared, as long as the hearts and dreams, continue to accumulate, there will be a harvest.

Answer 4

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