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请帮帮我吧！英语高手们，我有一份演讲稿，请帮忙看看有没有语法错误之类的问题，顺便帮我改一下！谢谢！

快一点，我明天就要。谢谢啦
Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happy to stand here.Today I'd like to say something about "my favourite sport".My favourite sport is swimming.I like summer,because in summer I can swimming.Swimming is good for our healthy.So I often swim with my friends in the afternoon.Please come on with us.Let's swimming!Are you ready?Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

总体上是没什么问题啦~但是你这个稿子里面很多句子都是以I 和My开头的，有点重复。棚纯一般要是想更出彩一些，更正式一些的话，可以多变换一下句型来渣渣表示同样的意思。下面是我帮你改的，你看看是不是喜欢。用你自己原来的也可以，我这份就是改的多链梁咐样了一点~呵呵

Good day everyone! My name is Anny. It is my honor to stand here today. In this very lovely morning, I'd like to share some ideas about "my favourite sports". My favourite exercise is swimming. Swimming even makes me like summer because I can swim the most the this season. Also swimming is good for our health. I often swim with my friends in weekend afternoon. Do you want to join us? Come on, let's go swimming together! Are you ready? Thanks for listening!

望采纳~

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我们的要求是里面要加一些关于青奥会的精神呀之类的，你能不能帮我加一下？谢谢

Answer 2

Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happy to stand here.Today I'd like to say something about "my favourite sport".My favourite sport is swimming.I like summer,because in summer I can swim.Swimming is good for our healthy.So I often swim with my friends in afternoon.Please come on with us.Let's swim!Are you ready?Thanks for listening!
can是助动词，后加动词原形，let sb do sth.

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woxiangqing我想请你帮忙把这篇演讲稿修改的更加好一些，我明天要参加比赛，请你把改好的演讲稿发给我

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Good morning everyone!
My name is Anny from class two grade one.Today the topic of my speech is "My favorite sport！"
My favourite sport is swimming.As we all know,swimming is good for our healthy.So I often go swimming with my friends .What is you favorite sport? Would you like to tell me ?
That's all!Thanks for your listening!
如果短的话告诉我！

Answer 3

写的不错，只是有洞迹几个语法错误纳野并。because in summer I can go swiming/swim. It is good for our health. （healthy是形容词). Please come with us. Let'脊耐s go swimming!

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谢谢你能不能帮我给里面加入一些关于青奥会的句子。谢谢