Question

求英语高手来!帮忙一下！ 不要网上翻译的！

翻译一下：（网上翻译的都是错的，语序都不对的，请自觉 谢谢）
我们生活在幸福快乐的生活中，但是大凉山的孩子们的生活却是困苦的。他们很冷，没有衣服穿。请大家为他们捐赠衣服。首先，衣服要洗干净；捐衣服时间是2012年1月4日，衣服统一放在Room 316 Meeting Hall；可以在衣服中放上你充满爱心的话语等。
（我会加分的）

Answer 1

我们生活在幸福快乐的生活中，但是大凉山的孩子们的生活却是困苦的。他们很冷，没有衣服穿。请大家为他们捐赠衣服。首先，衣服要洗干净；捐衣服时间是2012年1月4日，衣服统一放在Room 316 Meeting Hall；可以在衣服中放上你充满爱心的话语等。
翻译：
We live in a happy life, but the great Liangshan children's life is hard. They are very cold, no clothes to wear. Please donate clothes for them. First, wash clean; time is January 4, 2012to donate clothes, clothes uniform on a Room 316Meeting Hall; can be in the clothes on your loving words.
100%对

Answer 2

We live in a happy life, but the children in DaLiangShan leads a poor life .
The weather there is cold and the circumstances are rather tough .They doesn`t have enough warm clothes to wear. Please be kind enough to donate clothes for them.
First,It`s better that the clothes to be washed clean;
The time to donate your clothes is on January 4, 2012, and the clothes should be placed in Room 316, at Meeting Hall;
Additional, you can put some loving and caring words on the clothes.
如果直译成英语的话，我觉得还不够委婉。

Answer 3

We lead a happy life,but the life for the children in Daliang Mountain is tough,they are very cold,no clothes to wear,please show your donation for them.First, to wash the clothes clean;

Date of Donation : 4,Jan,2012;
Place of Donation : Room 316,Meeting Hall;

P.S:The clothes with full related love-heart words will be amazing!!

Answer 4

While we live in happiness,the children in Da Liang Mountain is living in poverty.They feel cold because they have nothing to wear.Please donate some clothes for them.
First,be sure that the clothes is clean. The time for donation lies on the fourth of January.Clothes is all put in Room 316 Meeting Hall.You can enclose a piece of note expressing your love for them in the clothes.

追问

不要网上百度，谷歌翻译的！！ 语序都是错的

追答

这是我自己翻的……

Answer 5

We live in a happy life but the children's in DaLiang Mountain are having a hard time. They feel cold and have not enough clothing. Please donate some clothes to them. Firstly the clothes need to be clean; the date of donation is on 4th of January, 2012, Clothes need to be put at Rm 316 Meeting Hall; You can put some caring messages to the clothes.