Question

英语作文，假如你是李华。这学期，你们班换了一个新英语老师（Miss Yan）。

她年轻热情，有很多优点。但是今天在课堂上他却让大家给他提出意见。于是大家纷纷发言，这不，还真提出了不少意见呢！请你根据下面的提示，给严老师写一封信，委婉地给她提些建议。80词左右
1.说话语速太快。
2.作业有点儿多。
3.有点儿严肃。

Answer 1

Dear Miss Yan:

We all love a new teacher who has been such a breath of fresh air. Here are my suggestions for a passionate teacher who deserves like yourself. Firstly, you might not notice, but If you could slow down when you speak, it would be of great help for us to understand what we learn better. Do you know that homework is given to us from every other course everyday? So if you could reduce your homework for us, and at the same time be more playful at teaching, I sure it is not only our lives that you are making so much happier but yours as well!
Thank you for all your hard work. I look forward to your new teaching style.

Best Regards,
Li Hua

中心内容80字左右，客套50字左右（本人喜欢客套），所以你嫌多去掉客套话就是了。

Answer 2

Dear Miss Yan:

We all love a new teacher who has been such a breath of fresh air. Here are my suggestions for a passionate teacher who deserves like yourself. Firstly, you might not notice, but If you could slow down when you speak, it would be of great help for us to understand what we learn better. Do you know that homework is given to us from every other course everyday? So if you could reduce your homework for us, and at the same time be more playful at teaching, I sure it is not only our lives that you are making so much happier but yours as well!
Thank you for all your hard work. I look forward to your new teaching style.

Best Regards,
Li Hua