Question

英语短文改错求助

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basketball is popular with young students at school, these days we are exciting about the basketball matches between the classes in their grade, we have chosen our plays careful and practised a lot of after school every day, we also had organized our cheer team, prepare dances and slogans to cheer ourselves up, in short, we have done many things for the matches, though we don't have good player and we are not quite skillful, we all believe that we can cooperate well but win , whatever the result it is, the most important thing are that we are working hard and enjoying ourselves, we are looking forward the coming matches

Answer 1

Basketball is popular among young students at school. These days we are excited about the basketball matches among classes of the the same grade; we have chosen our players carefully and practiced a lot after school. We also have organized our cheering teem and prepared dances and slogans to cheer for the players. In short, we have done many things for the matches. Even though we don't have good players and we are not very skillful, we all believe that we can cooperate well and win. The most important thing is that we work hard and enjoy ourselves, whatever the result is. We really look forward to the upcoming matches.

主要错误是标点，改用句号和分号的时候用成了逗号，导致意思混乱。

其他修改请对比原文和修改后的文章。

Answer 2

是你自己写的吗？为什么搞这么多完成时，过去式就可以了，完成时用的不好反而不对。我觉得我还是给你改成过去式吧。还有一些其他错误，你可以百度hi加我，我一个个和你说，争取写出更好的文章

Answer 3

basketball is popular among young students at school, these days we are excited about the basketball game between the two class In the same grade, we chose our players carefully and practised a lot after school every day, we also had organization cheerleader squad, preparing dances and slogans to cheer ourselves up, in short, we have done many things for the match though we did not have good players and we were not quite skillful, we all believe that we can cooperate well with each other and win , whatever the result is, the most important thing is that we worked hard and enjoyed ourselves, we are looking forward to the following basketball games.希望能给你带来帮助。

Answer 4

exciting--excited
grade--grades
careful--carefully