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十万火急，来个英语牛人帮我翻译一下！小弟谢谢啦！级别低，分不多，别嫌弃哈！

城市转型与服务业发展的互动与促进
---以xx市为例

美国次贷危机的爆发，使得众多新兴经济体重新反思以往经济发展所存在的弊端。转方式、调结构成为振兴我国经济的主攻方向。
在顺应举国转型大背景下，中西部城市争相承接东部产业转移，发展模式只是重复东部的发展路径，无法根本性缩小区域差距。因此，笔者认为，XX市需跨越式发展，另辟蹊径，立足优势，弥补不足。在城市转型中，应优先发展服务业，尤其是发展高附加值的高新技术、服务外包等产业。
本文通过将城市转型对服务业发展影响因素进行定量分析其与服务业的关联度及对服务业发展的促进度。同时，选取服务业内的各主要行业为样本，实证分析服务业行业发展对城市经济的影响。从而为xx市未来的发展方向及发展时所必须改进的弊端提出相应对策建议。
关键词:城市转型；服务业；影响因素；定量分析
别拿用软件翻译哦，那样不行滴

Answer 1

英语专业，自己的翻译，题目也要翻译？hope this can help you
The relation between city transformation and service industry
abstract
With the burst of subprime crisis in America, more emerging economies began to realize the inadequacies of previous economic development pattern. Pattern transition and restructuring became the top issues to develop China economy.
Under this circumstance, the Mid-West cities rushed to bring in Eastern industry transfer. Since the development pattern is coping from Eastern cities, it is hard to narrow the regional gap. Thus, the researcher suggests that xx city should change strategies to develop in a different way. During the city transformation, we should develop service industry in prior, particularly the high technology industry and outsourced service industry with high added value.
This paper analyzed the influence of city transformation on service industry and its relevancy. On the other hand, the researcher analyzed the influence of service industry on city transformation by analysis of samples taken from the major service industry.
The results put forward some suggestion for the XX city transformation and development in the future
Key words: city transformation; service industry; influence factor; quantitative analysis

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城市转型与服务业发展的互动与促进
---以xx市为例
题目也翻译下啊 大哥 谢谢了 这是翻译的行么
Interaction and Promotion of Urban Transition and Growth of Service Industry
--- illustrated by the case of Xi'an

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Mutual Influence and Promotion between City Transition and Service Industry
--A Case Study in XX City
这是我翻译的标题，注意，英语标题介词不需要大写，其他首字母大写，另外，把里面的transformation换成transition吧，总觉得有点不妥...因为transformation更多的是形态的变化

Answer 2

哎 好长啊 专业 用word的自带的翻译吧

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软件翻译的不行啊，一眼就能看出来。摆脱，会的话帮翻译下

追答

你这是要写论文吗？ 英文摘要！ 这个对我来说有点难 不好意思哈 以下是word翻译的 你实在没办法的话 可以借鉴 借鉴
The American loan crisis eruption, causes the multitudinous emerging economies to reconsider the malpractice which the former economical development exists.Changes prescriptions the type, the accent structure becomes promotes our country economy main attack direction.
In complied with the whole nation reforms under the big background, the mid-west city struggles eastern part the contract the industrial shift, the development pattern is only eastern part the repetition development way, is unable the fundamentals to reduce the region disparity.Therefore, the author believed that, XX city must the leap frog development, tries another method, foothold superiority, atonement insufficiency.In city reforming, should give priority to development service industry, develops outside in particular the high added value high technology and new technology, the service the package and so on the industries.
This article through carries on city reforming to service industry development influence factor quantitative analysis it presses with service industry interrelatedness and to service industry development the progress.At the same time, in selection service industry each main profession is the sample, the real diagnosis analysis service industry profession development to the urban economy influence.The malpractice which when is xx city future development direction and will develop must improve puts forward the corresponding countermeasure proposal.
Key word: City reforming; Service industry; Influence factor; Quantitative analysis

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这个貌似不行哦，我是论文用的。不过还是谢谢你了。。。