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英语短文改错、急

下面是文章。怎么改的，改的哪，麻烦具体！ Today we enjoy the wonderful view of Calgary,where the Winter Olympic Games were held in 1988. The ski jump tower, one of the highest spot in the city, was built for the event. when we stood at the top of it, believe it and not,we almost got blown off! Then we rode in the C-Train into downtown Calgary. We took the elevator to the top of the Petro-Canada building, which stand 53 floors high! Back at street level, we headed for the Energeum,that is a science museum all about energy. Astrange map of Alberta can be found here. When you press buttons on them, lights will turn on to show when and where oil and gas discovered in Alberta 每行一个错，最多只有一句是对的。麻烦具体。谢谢。
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Answer 1

Today we enjoyed the wonderful view of Calgary,where the Winter Olympic Games were held in 1988. The ski jump tower, one of the highest spots in the city, was built for the event. when we stood at the top of it, believe it or not,we almost got blown off! Then we rode in the C-Train into downtown Calgary. We took the elevator to the top of the Petro-Canada building, which stands 53 floors high! Back at street level, we headed to the Energeum,that is a science museum all about energy. Astrange map of Alberta can be found there . When you press buttons on them, lights will turn on to show when and where oil and gas were discovered in Alberta

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Today we★ enjoyed★ the wonderful view of Calgary,where the Winter Olympic Games were held in 1988. The ski jump tower, one of the highest ★spots★ in the city, was built for the event. when we stood at the top of it, believe it ★or★ not,we almost got blown off! Then we rode in the C-Train into downtown Calgary. We took the elevator to the top of the Petro-Canada building, which★ stands★ 53 floors high! Back at street level, we headed★ to★ the Energeum,★which ★is a science museum all about energy. Astrange map of Alberta can be found ★there★. When you press buttons on★ it★, lights will turn on to show when and where oil and gas ★were discovered★