Question

短文改错“Life is speeding up.Everyone is not getting good“This may sound like anything s...

短文改错“Life is speeding up.Everyone is not getting good“This may sound like anything someone would say today.But in fact,an unknow citizen lived in Rome wrote it.We all love new inventions.They are exciting,amazing and can even changing our lives.And have all these development really improved the quality of our lives？See this：You're rushing to finish your homework on the computer;your mobile phone rings;a QQ message from your friend appeared on the screen,and noise from the television is getting louder and louder.Suddenly the computer goes to blank and you lose all your work.Now you have to stay up all night to get them done.How calm and happy do you feel？
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Answer 1

1,good改成better
2, would 后加not. 因为是表现同别人不同的观点。可以从后面的But 可以看出来，如果不加not。后面说的就没有任何意义了。
3，lived 改成living
4，去掉new。因为是invention本来就是新的，加new就重复了。
5,changing改成change，因为接在can后面用动词原型
6，development改成developments，是可数名词，前面用了these，所以加s.
7, finish 改成finishing. rushing to doing sth.
8,rings改成ringing
9,去掉to. goes blank
10,do改成can