Question

这句话的语法或是语序有什么问题不？

Compared with First-line Managers and Middle Managers, leadership responsible for making organization-wide decisions and establishing the plans and goals that affect the entire company instead of specific department or day-to-day activities.

Answer 1

这句话的语法或是语序有什么问题不？ 检举 | 18 分钟前 提问者： zhy1993zhy | 浏览次数：10次
Compared with First-line Managers and Middle Managers, leadership responsible for making organization-wide decisions and establishing the plans and goals that affect the entire company instead of specific department or day-to-day activities.
答：这不是一句完整的句子。（别看这么长）。
句子没有谓语。可能是漏打了。请再检查一下。
析：Compared with First-line Managers and Middle Managers, 是过去分词短语作状语
leadership 应该是句子的主语
responsible for making organization-wide decisions and establishing the plans and goals that affect the entire company instead of specific department or day-to-day activities.
应该是形容词短语作后置定语，修饰leadship的。
其结构是：responsible for doing A and doing B (that-定语从句）
doing A= making organization-wide decisions
doing B= establishing the plans and goals
that-定语从句是： that affect the entire company instead of specific department or day-to-day activities.

很可能谓语动词是is,在responsible 前，这样主句就是一个主系表结构了。
Leadership is resposible for doing A and doing B (定从）

Managers are often described as first-line ,middle ,or top.

管理人员通常被划分为三类:一线管理人员,中层管理者和高层管理者.

①First-line managers are at the lowest level of management and manage the work of nonmanagerial employees who are directly or indirectly involved with production or creation of the organization’s products.

一线管理人员是管理层中最低层的管理者,他们管理那些直接参与组织产品的生产和创造的非管理人员.

②Middle managers include all levels of management between the first-line managers and the top level of the organization. They manage the work of first-line managers .

中层管理者是指处于组织中一线管理者和最高管理者之间的管理人员.他们管理一线管理人员的工作.

③Top managers are responsible for making organization-wide decisions and establishing the plans and goals that affect the entire organization.

最高管理者负责对整个组织作出决策,构建计划,并制定影响整个组织发展的目标的人.

所以将原句中的leadership 改为 top managers are， 这句子就对了。
供参考。

Answer 2

是错的，没有谓语！

Answer 3

这里只有一个分词状语，没有主句。

Answer 4

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可是word说 consider revising 囧