Question

高三英语 短文改错

短文改错。（一共有10个错误）
There is an Engilsh saying"It never rains but it pours".I now believe it was true.Last Saturday,I had a terrible time.It was rather cold,or quite sunny,so after lunch I went downtown.While I was going to home,it started to rain and I arrived home coldly and miserable.I decided to have a hot bath.I was getting ready to have my bath while the doorbell rang.It was a salesman and it took me several minute to get rid of him.Unfortunate,all the time he was taking to us,the water was running.You can imagine the state of the bathroom!

Answer 1

你好，可改为：There is an Engilsh saying"It never rains but it pours".I now believe it is true.Last Saturday,I had a terrible time.It was rather cold and quite sunny,so after lunch I went downtown.While I was going home,it started to rain and I arrived home coldly and miserably.I decided to have a hot bath.I was getting ready to have my bath while the doorbell rang.It was a salesman and it took me several minutes to get rid of him.Unfortunately,when he was taking to us,the water was running.You can imagine the state of the bathroom.满意请速速采纳，谢谢合作！

追问

短文改错只有三种形式。一是去掉错误的词，二是添加缺少的词，三是换掉错词。没有那种自己加词的。

追答

你应该早点说要求啊。修改如下：it was true-it is true
or quite- and quite
go downtown -go to downtown
I was going to home-I was going home
coldly-cold
while the doorbell-when the doorbell``
several minute-several minutes
Unfortunate-Unfortunately
to us-to me
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Answer 2

it was true 改为it is true
or quite``改为 and quite```
go downtown 改为 go to downtown
i was going to home 改为i was coming home
coldly 改为cold
while the doorbell```改为when the doorbell``
several minute改为several minutes
Unfortunate改为Unfortunately
to us 改为 to me
can 改为could
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