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18Asweallknow,wearethatweeat.Therefore,it’sveryimportantofustoformhealthyeatinghabits... 18
As we all know,we are that we eat. Therefore, it’s very important of us to form healthy eatinghabits. Thus, bad eating habits are still very common among our students. Someof we often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks, some are particularly about food, andstill some eat too many. All these bad habits will surely do harm to ourhealthy.
To keep fit, weshould have various healthy diets, which generally including fish, meat,vegetables, fruit and main food as well. Besides, we should have had mealsregularly.
In my opinion, weshould develop healthy eating habits build up a strong body. Only in this waycan we have enough energy.
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1。we are what we eat
2. it 's very important for us
3.some of us
4.do harm to our health
5.we should have meals regularly
6. we should develop healthy eating habits to build up a ......
7.第二行thus,改为however
8.第三行about 不对可以改为like
就找出这些问题啦~望楼主给分啊!!!!
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As we all know中all去掉
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