Question

英语短文改错,帮下忙。谢谢了！

第一行Yesterday,my friend Tina invited to a party that lasted until二2 o'clock in the moring.Tina hurried home after a party.She三was walking in a quiet street when a man with a knife running四towards her.He ordered Tina to take off her earring.All of五 a suddenly,Tina had a bright idea.She tried to cover her六necklace while she took off her earrings and threw it on the七ground.The robber who thought the necklace would cost more,八so he changes his mind and ordered Tina to give him her九 necklace.先帮忙做八行,谢了。

Answer 1

1.my friend Tina invited to 改为my friend Tina （was）invited to 。被动语态2. in the moring 改为 in the mor（n）ing3. running 改为was running这件事发生在过去进行时。4.earring改为earrings，用复数。从下文六处那边也用复数也可看出。5.因为all of a sudden=suddenly 所以改为all of a sudden6. threw it on the七ground改为 threw i（them）on theground，因为耳环是复数的。7.would cost more改为would valuable more 表示某个东西之前用valuable，不用COST。COST表示花费。8. he changes his mind 改为 he change（d） his mind ，整篇文章都是过去式，怎么会用一般现在时呢？ 回答完毕，希望予以采纳，谢谢。

Answer 2

好答案。给我分吧！