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DearSirorMadam,I’mastudentinGuangMingHighSchool.I’mgladtolearnthatyouwantsomepart-tim...
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a student in Guang Ming High School. I’m glad to learn that you want some part-time English reporter. I’m quite interesting in it.
I think I’m fit to the job. As a student , I’ve read a lot and have many knowledge in many fields. I’m fond of English and do well in speaking or writing. Besides, I’m easy to get along and enjoy working with others. That is also important is that I once work as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I’m sure I can do the job well unless I get the position.
Looking forward to receive your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Yiran一共九个错误 展开
I’m a student in Guang Ming High School. I’m glad to learn that you want some part-time English reporter. I’m quite interesting in it.
I think I’m fit to the job. As a student , I’ve read a lot and have many knowledge in many fields. I’m fond of English and do well in speaking or writing. Besides, I’m easy to get along and enjoy working with others. That is also important is that I once work as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I’m sure I can do the job well unless I get the position.
Looking forward to receive your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Yiran一共九个错误 展开
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a student in Guang Ming High School. I’m glad to learn that you want some part-time English (reporter改为reporters). I’m quite (interesting改为interested) in it.
I think I’m fit (to改成for) the job. As a student, I’ve read a lot and have (many改为much) knowledge in many fields. I’m fond of English and do well in speaking (or改为and) writing. Besides, I’m easy to get along (加入with) and enjoy working with others. (That改为What) is also important is that I once (work改为worked) as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I’m sure I can do the job well (unless改为if) I get the position.
Looking forward to (receive改为receiving) your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Yiran
和楼上答案不同,总共十处错误,有一处错误肯定是楼主打错。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a student in Guang Ming High School. I’m glad to learn that you want some part-time English (reporter改为reporters). I’m quite (interesting改为interested) in it.
I think I’m fit (to改成for) the job. As a student, I’ve read a lot and have (many改为much) knowledge in many fields. I’m fond of English and do well in speaking (or改为and) writing. Besides, I’m easy to get along (加入with) and enjoy working with others. (That改为What) is also important is that I once (work改为worked) as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I’m sure I can do the job well (unless改为if) I get the position.
Looking forward to (receive改为receiving) your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Yiran
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尊敬的女生/先生,
我是光明高中的学生。很高兴了解到您需要招聘一些兼职英语播报员,我对此非常感兴趣。
我想我很适合这份工作。作为一个学生,我已经读过并且具有一定的各领域的知识。我非常喜欢英语并且擅长口语和书写。另外,我是一个很好相处的人并喜欢和同事一起工作。还有一点较重要的是我曾经是我们学校广播台的播音员。所以,我很确定如果我得到这个职位的话,我一定可以把我的工作做好。期待您尽早的答复。
真诚的
张一然
我是光明高中的学生。很高兴了解到您需要招聘一些兼职英语播报员,我对此非常感兴趣。
我想我很适合这份工作。作为一个学生,我已经读过并且具有一定的各领域的知识。我非常喜欢英语并且擅长口语和书写。另外,我是一个很好相处的人并喜欢和同事一起工作。还有一点较重要的是我曾经是我们学校广播台的播音员。所以,我很确定如果我得到这个职位的话,我一定可以把我的工作做好。期待您尽早的答复。
真诚的
张一然
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reporter--reporters
interesting----interested
many--much
do-doing
get---be got
that---what
work ----worked
unless----if
receive----receiving
reporter--reporters
interesting----interested
many--much
do-doing
get---be got
that---what
work ----worked
unless----if
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reporter--reporters
interesting----interested
many--much
do-doing
get---be got
that---what
work ----worked
unless----if
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interesting----interested
many--much
do-doing
get---be got
that---what
work ----worked
unless----if
receive----receiving
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