Question

英语短文改错~谢谢~

I was on the bus to the cinema at 6:00pm.It was rush hour.After a while,a passenger near to me got up and I took her seat.When I sat down,I found an old lady stand beside me.I stood up at once but was about to ask her to take the seat,while fashionable young girl took it.I stared to her,thinking she might have not see the old lady.So I said to her,"Lady, could you please leave this seat for this madam?"She took a glance at us and closed her eye instead.What a worse manner!Won't she grow old in the future?

Answer 1

错的太多，惨不忍睹。建议重写。

追问

这是英语改错题。。

Answer 2

I went to the cinema at 6:00pm by bus.It was rush hour. After a while, a paaaenger near to me got up and left.