Question

英语短文改错！急

短文改错it is no doubt that everyone makespromises allhislife。therefore，just as the proverb goes，“promise is debt。”that is，once you made a promise，youjust keep it if you break your words，you won‘t be a preson worth of good faith。stillmoreworse，you‘ll lose your friendsandeven fame。so i think it necessaryandimportant to think it twice after making apromiseandkeeping it once you‘ve made it whatever happens。only by this way can you make a true man which deserves people‘s respect。

Answer 1

更正在括号处标明，保证准确率！

(It改成There) is no doubt that everyone makes promises all his life. Therefore, just as the proverb goes, “promise is debt.” That is, once you (made改成make 或 在made前面加上have) a promise, you just keep it. If you break your (words改为word), you won‘t be a preson (worth改为worthy) of good faith. Still (去掉more) worse, you‘ll lose your friends and even fame. So I think it necessary and important to think it twice (after改为before) making a promise and (keeping改为keep) it once you‘ve made it whatever happens. Only (by改为in) this way can you make a true man (which改为who) deserves people‘s respect.

Answer 2

第一行his改为their
第二行made改为make，more去掉
第三行it后面加is
第四行it去掉
第五局which改成who

Answer 3

短文改错 It is no doubt that everyone makes promises all his life。Therefore，just as the proverb goes，“promise is debt。”that is，once you have made a promise，you just have to keep it. If you break your words，you won‘t be a preson worth of good faith。Still worse，you‘ll lose your friends and even (credibility)fame。So I think it necessary and important to think it twice after making a promise and keeping it once you‘ve made it whatever happens。Only by this way can you make a true man which(who) deserves people‘s respect。