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(本大题10分,开头已给出，但不计入总词数，文中不能出现真实姓名和校名) Animal the panda Look

(本大题10分,开头已给出，但不计入总词数，文中不能出现真实姓名和校名) Animal the panda Look Color 黑白色 Eyes 圆圆的黑眼睛 Favorite food bamboo Reason 非常可爱 My favorite animal in the zooMy name is Li Ming . Today__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

My favorite animal in the zoo My name is Li Ming . Today is Sunday. I go to visit the zoo with my friends. In the zoo, we see the pandas from Ya’an. They are my favorite animals. They are black and white. They have round and black eyes. Their favorite food is bamboo. They are very cute, so I love them very much. I am happy today.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍今天去动物园的活动和自己最喜欢的动物。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I go to......； They are......；They have.....及I love......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了去动物园餐馆，接下来介绍自己最喜欢的动物熊猫，最后说出自己很高兴。此处用了go to visit the zoo，with my friends，very much等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。