Question

假如你是李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式和初中有很大不同，你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自

假如你是李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式和初中有很大不同，你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。要包括以下内容：开始学习高中英语时，觉得英语比初中英语难得多，几乎丧失信心。后来认识到英语的重要性。每天努力学习英语。向老师和同学请教更好的英语学习方法。现在英语取得了很大进步，对英语越来越感兴趣。提示：初中junior high school 高中 senior high school注意：1、词数100左右；2、信的开头与结尾已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Li, I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student. When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. Now, I’m improving my English greatly. And I’m getting more and more interested in learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class. Wish you all the best. Yours, Li Hua

试题分析：题目是学生熟悉的书信作文，要求给老师写一篇书信，信的要点已经给出，作文必须包括所有要点，但不能逐条翻译，要注意语句的连贯、通顺。注意书信格式要正确，时态和人称的使用要得当。作文主要讲述的是过去的事情，最好使用一般过去时。 【亮点说明】范文使用Later, so, and, also, Now等连接前后句和上下文，做到了衔接紧密。范文使用了较多的短语：make great progress in, in the beginning, find it+形容词作宾补, listened to, ways of doing, get interested in等，使范文内容变得充实。 范文也用到了一些重要的句型：have done sth since+从句, 宾语从句what we learned in junior school, more and more, thank sb for sth等。