Question

英语短文改错求助

My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy . Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now ,she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me！I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. So is my grandmother, a kind and hard-working woman. I'll respect and love her forever.

大约10处，多谢各位。

Answer 1

My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy（改为seventies） . Although she（+has） received little school education, but（去掉but） she is aware that knowledge is of great important （改为importance）to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care （+of）him so that my father could cost （改为spend）more time on his studies. Now ,she often encouraged （改为encourages）me to study hard. This summer she was bad（改为badly）ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in （+the）bed, made（改为making） new shoes for me！I was so deeply moving （改为moved）that tears came to my eyes. So is my grandmother, a kind and hard-working woman. I'll respect and love her forever.

Answer 2

seventy不对,应为复数或序数词形式, aware后应有一个of, important 应为名词形式 importance. 应为 took good care of him encouraged 应为encourages bad 改为badly made改为making moving改为moved is改为was

看一下吧,应该差不多.如有疑问再说

Answer 3

seventy(seventies) but 去掉 important(importance) took good care of cost(spent) studies（study）encourages badly sitting in bed (sitting in the bed) made(making)
moving (moved)