Although friends make an impression on your life, they do not have the same influence that
your family has. Nothing is as important to me as my family. From them, I
learned everything that is important. I learned about trust, ambition, and love.
Your family is with you forever. They are not going to leave you because they find another
daughter they like better. They are not going to leave you because they think you are too
much trouble. A family is permanent, while friends come and go.
Your parents are your role models. They will encourage you to do your best, to push
yourself, and to improve yourself. Friends want you to stay the same: they don't want you
to be different. A family is ambitious for you. Friends are not.
Your family teaches you about love. A family's love is not judgmental. They love you for
everything you are. Friends may love you because you have a new car or because you go
out with them on Saturdays. A family loves you. Friends only like you.
Without my family, I wouldn't know what to do. I wouldn't feel as secure. I might not have
the ambition to go to school. I probably would be afraid to love. My family is my greatest in
fluence.
译文
虽然朋友给你的生活留下了深刻的印象，但他们的影响与你的影响不同。你的家人。对我来说，没有什么比我的家人更重要了。从他们那里，我学会了一切重要的东西。我学会了信任、雄心和爱。
你的家人永远和你在一起。他们不会因为找到另一个人而离开你他们更喜欢女儿。他们不会因为他们认为你也离开你而离开你太麻烦了。家庭是永久的，朋友来往往。
你的父母是你的榜样。他们会鼓励你尽力而为你自己，并提高你自己。朋友们希望你保持原样：他们不想要你与众不同。一个家庭对你来说是雄心勃勃的。朋友不是。
你的家人教你爱。家庭的爱不是评判。他们爱你是因为你的一切。朋友们可能爱你，因为你有一辆新车，或者因为你去了。周六和他们一起出去。一个家庭爱你。只有你这样的朋友。没有我的家人，我就不知道该怎么办了。我就不会觉得那么安全了。我可能没有去上学的野心。我可能会害怕去爱。我的家庭是我最伟大的能量。
英语作文写作方法与技巧
1、注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分（opening paragraph）说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分（body paragraph）围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。结尾部分（concluding paragraph）对全文内容进行总结和概括。
作文整体要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯，前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容。
2、 确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。写主题句应该注意一下几点：
归纳出文章的几个要点；提炼出一句具有概括性的话；主题句应具有可持续性，抓住、吸引读者。
3、 追加成分，扩展句子
在阅读理解中遇到长句子时，我们要学会通过找句子主干，把长句子缩短；而在写作文时，我们则要反其道而行，针对目标句子，我们在要点基础上适当添加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语（从句）、状语（从句）、非谓语结构、独立主格等成分，使表达更清晰，主题更突出。
