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写的很好。
Nowadays,people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.
It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development.To
solve the problem,some pieces of advice are put forward.Some people suggest
that more streets and roads should be built.In this way,
the traffic density can be redncedi hence speeding up the flow of buses and
cars.But the new roads and streets will be filled with many cars and buses
soon.
Some people advise to limit the number of bikes and cars.This can decrease
the traffic flow.But on the other haad,this will affect the consumption and
make buses more crowded.
In my opinion,the number of private cars should be put under control.And at
the same time,buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used
by other vehicles.Besides,underground train and city train should be developed
quickly.
Nowadays,people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.
It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development.To
solve the problem,some pieces of advice are put forward.Some people suggest
that more streets and roads should be built.In this way,
the traffic density can be redncedi hence speeding up the flow of buses and
cars.But the new roads and streets will be filled with many cars and buses
soon.
Some people advise to limit the number of bikes and cars.This can decrease
the traffic flow.But on the other haad,this will affect the consumption and
make buses more crowded.
In my opinion,the number of private cars should be put under control.And at
the same time,buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used
by other vehicles.Besides,underground train and city train should be developed
quickly.
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