Question

帮我检查一下英语作文有没有语法错误(不算大小写）

1.dear uncle wang,
i am a student from xinhua middle school .we will hold a food festival to raise money for the poor students in a county school.i want to invite you to come at 11:00 a.m. next sunday.hope you can come.we will be really happy.
sincerly
kangkang
2.we all know that food is very important to our health.fruits and vegetables are good for our health.they are green food.if we always eat them,we will be healthy.however,if you eat to much junk food,you will never be healthy.most of the junk food are high salt and high sugar.you will be fat if you eat too much of them.but they are always cheap and delicious so a lot of teenagers and children like to eat them.so we should eat less junk food and more vegetables from now on.

Answer 1

第二个，第二行food要复数，if的假设形式不能那样写，要这样（If we always ate them,we would be healthy),下一句一样，eat改成ate，will改成would ，you will be fat 那句也要改
望及时采纳，有问题请提出，谢谢

追问

那句话没有必要当作虚拟语气看吧，只有虚拟语气才是那样的
green food 是可数的么？

追答

哦，那个greenfood 是组词啊，确实可以不用复数。如果我们经常吃他们，我们就会健康，这不就是假设句么

追问

假设句和虚拟语气不一样，只有虚拟语气才需要变成过去式，虚拟语气是不可能发生的

追答

虚拟语气并不完全代表不可能发生的事，他也会出现难以实现的事，所以你的假设句也算虚拟语气

追问

我经常吃绿色食品很难以出现么

追答

虚拟语气所指的事也是有可能发生的

Answer 2

1.Dear uncle wang,
I am a student from Xinhua middle school .we will hold a food festival to raise money for the poor students in a county school.i want to invite you to come at 11:00 a.m. next sunday. I hope you can come.we will be really happy.

2.we all know that food is very important to our health. Fruits and vegetables are good for our health.they are green food.if we always eat them,we will be healthy.however,if you eat too much junk food,you will never be healthy.most of the junk food is high salt and high sugar.you will be fat if you eat too much of them.but they are always cheap and delicious. So a lot of teenagers like to eat them.so we should eat less junk food and more vegetables from now on.

Answer 3

1.county（县）应改为country（乡村)
2.hope you can come.缺主语I
3.teenagers and children两词的外延有重叠部分，不可并列。
其他的句子语法上没问题，但文中句与句的连贯性欠缺。

追问

2是祈使句

Answer 4

1.hope you can come:we all hope you can come.
2.if you eat to much :to应该改成too
就这两个错误，其他都对了

Answer 5

个人认为第二段有点罗嗦,还有most of +不可数名词的系动词应该用第三人称单数吧