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mang boys and girls likes watching TV .they always spend some time to watch TV every day . today morning,i asked some classmates ,"what kind of TV shows do you like ?" here are their answers :
XXX1 likes sperts shows "that make me study some sperts skills." he said . but he can't stant Today News .he thinks they're very borning.XXX2lovesChinese Cooking .because she likes cooking . she also likes Healthy Every day .she wants a biautiful build .XXX3 likes Animal World . he thinks they'revery cute and friendly. but he doesn't like tiger ." it's a little scary ." He said . XXX5's answer is very interesting . "i don't like watching TV. He said . 帮看看吧........... 时态 1XXX5's answer is very interesting 2that make me study some sperts skills 注意这2句 对么.

Answer 1

Many（拼写错误） boys and girls likes（改为like） watching TV .they always spend some time to watch（to watch改为watching） TV every day . today morning（改为This morning）,i asked some classmates ,"what kind of TV shows do you like ?" here are（改为were，过去时） their answers :
XXX1 likes sperts（sports拼写错误） shows "that make me study（改为learn，学到不是学习） some sperts（sports） skills." he said . but he can't（改为couldn't） stant（改为stand） Today（改为Today's今日新闻，是今日的新闻，要用所有格） News .he thinks they're very borning（改为boring，拼写错误）.XXX2 loves Chinese Cooking .because she likes cooking . she also likes Healthy Every day（改为Day，大写） .she wants （加to have） a biautiful（改为beautiful拼写错误） build .XXX3 likes Animal（改为 World . he thinks they're very cute and friendly. but he doesn't like tiger ." it's a little scary ." He said . XXX5's answer is（改为was） very interesting . "i don't like watching TV". He said .
时态有些问题，我将今天早上你同学的回答有关的改为过去时，他们平时的想法、观点还是保留一般现在时了

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they always spend some time to watch（to watch改为watching） TV every day
today morning（改为This morning
为什么..

Answer 2

拼写错误many（一行） 、 sports（三行）、boring（四行） 句子首字母要大写
第一行like不加s； 今天早晨不写todaymorning 可写this morning；
第三行时态可以；that make要么改that为they 要么make加s；but he can't stant Today News 这句也别扭 首先can't 表不能,最好用wouldn't表不愿 每日新闻叫daily news
第五行she wants a biautiful build可以删去 更节目无关 前后表达的意思上也没个衔接biautiful也拼错了。
第六行时态问题 前边一直用一般时 不喜欢老虎就成过去时了，改成do not；XXX5's answer is其中的is改成was因为过去了
加油 努力吧。
PS:有则改之无则加勉吧。

Answer 3

many boys and girls like watching TV .they spend lots of time in watching TV every day . this morning,i asked some classmates ''what kind of TV shows do you like ?" . here are their answers :
XXX1 likes sperts shows that make him master some sperts skills, he said ,but he can't stand Today News .he thinks they're very borning. XXX2 loves Chinese Cookingb, ecause she likes cooking . she also likes Healthy Every day .she wants a beautiiful figure .XXX3 likes Animal World . he thinks they're very cute and friendly. but he doesn't like tiger . t's a little scary , he said . XXX5's answer is very interesting . "i don't like watching TV. he said .