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求英语高手帮忙改错。好的加分 在线等

1.whatever team wins on saturday will go through to the national championships
2.the reason why they were always poor was whether they paid little attention to education
3.it was after he got what he had desired when he realized it was not so important
4.it has been announced that candidates will remain in their seats until all the papers have been collected
5.the fire is too small to compete on large international companies
6.because he was working hard，his dream realized in last
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Answer 1

这样修改：
1.whatever team wins on saturday，it will go through to the national championships
首先明确whatever team 没错，错在句子的混乱，有点中式英语味道了，这是受汉语思维影响造成的。此处是让步状语从句，后部分是主句，主句要有自己的主语，因此添加主语it才对，全句相当于：No matter what team wins on saturday，it will go through to the national championships.
周六的比赛谁获胜，谁就晋级参加全国锦标赛。

2.the reason why they were always poor was that they paid little attention to education
the reason why ......+ be+ that(引导表语从句，千万不能用because,也是中式的。)
他们老是贫穷的根源在于他们很少关注教育。

3.it was after he got what he had desired that he realized it was not so important
强调句it was +被强调部分+that......，强调部分是after he got what he had desired ，因此用that.
他得到渴望得到的东西之后，才明白那东西没有那么重要。

4.it has been announced that candidates should remain in their seats until all the papers have been collected
will改为should，should用于“建议、命令、要求”等的从句中时表示义务或责任，意思是：应该，应当，必须，务必。还可以这样解释,在表示坚持、建议、命令、要求等的主语从句中，谓语用虚拟语气，should+动词原形：
在句型"It is suggested ( proposed, ordered，desired, requested、 announced 等)+ that .... "中，that 后面的从句中的谓语动词用： should + 动词原形。 含有上面词汇的宾语从句、表语从句或含有同根名词的同位语从句，都有这一用法。
据布告，（考试结束时）考生务必待在原位，直到考卷被收集完毕。

5.the firm is too small to compete with large international companies
fire是不是打错了，是firm吗？compete with ..... 与....竞争
这公司太小，无法与大型的国际公司竞争。

6.because he was working hard，his dream was realized at last
realized是及物动词，“实现他的梦想”是：realized his dream,现在是宾语做了主语，当然要用被动语态，另外告诉你一点：come true中的come是不及物动词，没被动，只能说his dream came true，不能说his dream was came true,也不能说came true his dream。再有就是短语错了
，应该是at last“最后，最终”
因为他努力，梦想终于实现了。

Answer 2

1.whatever( 改为whichever) team wins on saturday will go through to the national championships
2.the reason why they were always poor was whether(改为that) they paid little attention to education
3.it was after he got what he had desired when(改为that) he realized it was not so important
4.it has been announced that candidates will remain (前面一词改为这两词be remained)in their seats until all the papers have been collected
5.the fire is too small to compete on (改为with)large international companies
6.because he was working hard，his dream(加上was) realized in last

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追答

注意第四题有了改动，用shall来代词will . 因为当二三人称做主语时用shall表示命令
1.whatever( 改为whichever根据句意要用无论哪一个，所以要用这个词。) team wins on saturday will go through to the national championships
2.the reason why they were always poor was whether(改为that因为reason做主语它的表语从句一定用that来引导。) they paid little attention to education
3.it was after he got what he had desired when(改为that根据句子结构和句意。句子为强调句所以用构成强调句的that) he realized it was not so important
4.it has been announced that candidates will(改为shall因为是第三人称做主语用这个情态动词表示命令) remain in their seats until all the papers have been collected
5.the fire is too small to compete on (改为with因为compete with是一固定搭配“和...竟争”)large international companies
6.because he was working hard，his dream(加上was因主语和谓语动词之间是被动关系要用被动语态) realized in last
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Answer 3

你能把中文要表达的意思补充上吗

Answer 4

1 whatever改为whichever
2 whether改为that
3 when 改为that
4 will改为should
5 on 改为 with
6 in 改为at

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1 whatever改为whichever （ 根据句义，哪一支球队更合理，且whichever可作定语）
2 whether改为that （表语从句中意思已表达完整，加上“是否”反而不通）
3 when 改为that （强调句，结构就是 it +be+被强调部分+that）
4 will改为should （should主语是二三人称时，表示命令、请求或许诺）
5 on 改为 with competewith （与...竞争、竞赛，是固定搭配）
6 in 改为at （at last为固定词组，最终，最后的意思。）

Answer 5

1, whatever 改为whichever
2, whether 改为 because
3，When 改为 that
4，candidates 前加个 the
5，on 改为 with
6，realized 前加入 was ，in 改为 at

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