Question

英语改错问题，帮忙解答一下，哪里有错误，谢谢！

This is first time I speak in English before so many people.I feel nervous.But I'd like to use the this opportunity to introudce myself.I hope you to know me better.My name is LinHua,and I'm fifteen years old.I've been quite happliy in this class.We learn English,Chinese,matheatics and several subjects together.We play games together in the break and after school.We help each other with our school problems. I feel in home in this class.I like English and Chinese more. I hope I could work as an newspaperman in the future.
帮我找一下关于这里的错误，谢谢！

Answer 1

①This is the first time I have spoken in English in front of so many people.（first前要加定冠词；the first time 后面要用完成时态；before一般指时间、顺序，in front of 多指空间，不过也有说可通用的， 你自己取舍吧）
②I'd like to seize this/the opportunity to introduce myself.（seize the opportunity抓住机会更好；this 或the 两个选一个就好了；introduce注意拼写）
③I hope that you can know me better.（hope不可加双宾语，只能说hope to do或hope that）
④I've been quite happy in this class.（quite是副词，句子缺表语，要用形容词happy）
⑤We play games together during the break and after school.
⑥I feel at home in this class.
⑦I hope I could work as a newspaperman in the future.（元音音素开头的单词用an，否则用a）

Answer 2

This is the first time I speak English before so many people.I feel nervous.But I'd like to use this opportunity to introudce myself.I hope you know me better.My name is Lin Hua,and I'm fifteen years old.I've been quite happy in this class.We learn English,Chinese,math and several subjects .We play games together in the break and after school.We help each other with our school problems. I feel at home in this class.I like English and Chinese more. I hope I can work as a newspaperman in the future.

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Answer 3

This is the first time I speak English before so many people.I feel a little nervous, but I think it is a good chance to intrduce myself. I hope that you will know me better and I would like to make friends with you. My name is Lin Hua,I am fifteen years old. I am always very happy in this class, At school, we learn English, Chinese , maths and some other subjects. Of all the subjects , I like English and Chinese best .my classmates and I often play game in our free time. we help with each other in our study, I feel that I were at home in this class, I hope that I will be a reporter in the future.

Answer 4

This is the first time I speak in English in front of so many people.I feel nervous.But I'd like to use this opportunity to introudce myself.I hope you will know me better.My name is LinHua, I'm fifteen years old.I've been quite happy in this class., because We study English,Chinese,matheatics and several ther subjects together.We play games together in the break and after school.We help each other with our problems. I feel at home in this class.I like English and Chinese best. I hope I can work as a newspaperman in the future.
改的地方都空格大一些。GOOD LUCK!

Answer 5

括号里为修改成分
I've been quite happliy (happy) in this class.
We play games together in (during) the break and after school.
I feel in (at) home in this class.
I hope I could work as an (a) newspaperman in the future.