以My favorite sport 我最喜欢的体育运动，80作文英语
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My favorite sport is swimming. These days a lot of people like me love spending their spare time in the swimming pool because it's too hot during the summer outside. Keeping myself in the water helps me stay cool. At the same time, I can exercise my body, stay healthy, and I don't even have to worry about sweating too much! Swimming is becoming more and more popular recently. I hope you can join me next time and perhaps we can make good friends with each other!
My favorite sport is swimming. These days a lot of people like me love spending their spare time in the swimming pool because it's too hot during the summer outside. Keeping myself in the water helps me stay cool. At the same time, I can exercise my body, stay healthy, and I don't even have to worry about sweating too much! Swimming is becoming more and more popular recently. I hope you can join me next time and perhaps we can make good friends with each other!
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哦哦这样啊，那我改简单一点~~还是讲游泳，修改如下：
My favorite sport is swimming. I love spending my spare time in the swimming pool. In the summer it's too hot outside. If I keeping myself in the water, I can stay cool. Also, swimming exercises my body. This way, I can stay healthy, and I don't even have to worry about sweating too much! Swimming is a very popular sport nowadays. I hope you can join me next time. Together we will have lots of fun!
所有复合句都改成了简单句，从句基本上都删掉了。
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