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假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意

假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯; 3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。参考词汇: 校园campus 创意作品innovation 颁奖prize-giving

Answer 1

Notice An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner.  Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills. Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use. All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure!  It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions. Call Li Hua at 44876655. Come on, everybody! It’s your show time. Student Union

试题分析：这是一篇书面通知的书面表达，要求作为学生会主席李华，就学校举行的“校园生活，创意无限”的活动，给学生出一个书面通知，要点不是通过文字，而是通过图画表示出来，所以考生在写作的时候，要认真看图，通过图画找出所给的重要信息。有活动内容，活动时间地点，和联系人和电话等信息，弄清要点后，关键的是在写作的过程中，也要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，但是要想得高分，要特别注意使用一些高级词汇和高级句型，如定语从句，强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。 【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：around the corner.即将到来，Along with连同， hand in上交，occur to使想起，on show展览， Look forward to盼望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如： Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.这句话用了定语从句， Note that your innovations must be school things. 这句话用了宾语从句，Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.这句话使用现在分词做状语和宾语从句。