Question

一篇初中英语作文 写的很烂。请告诉我那错了，怎麽该，以及怎麽提高

Dear teachers and schoolmates，
I‘m very piond that I can speak to you here ，Now environment is terrible that have lots of trouble，
For example the factory pollutions and the life pollutions and the water ecological imbalance 。We should keep the environment clean and the ecological balance 。Don‘t waste water if don’t have water weare will death，
In future please we keep our environment together。

Answer 1

piond是什么意思哦，拼错了，荣幸是Honored
Don‘t waste water if don’t have water weare will death，不要浪费水，如果没有水。我们正将死亡，
应该是将要死亡

追问

是proud 将要死亡 得怎麽改啊

追答

把weare改成we
还有啊 death是名词，要改成be dead 或die

Answer 2

Dear teachers and students:
I‘m very glad that I have the chance to adress you here .
Now environment is becoming terrible .
For example the factory pollutions and the life pollutions and the water ecological imbalance 。We should keep the environment clean and the ecological balance 。Don‘t waste water .If there is no water we will die.
now it,s time we take some steps to keep our environment 。