Question

英语作文 帮助别人 写一件事的啊

Answer 1

Trying To Help Others
Last Sunday, I went to Haimen to go shopping. I saw a lot of people standing in front of the supermarket when I was walking down the street.
I wondered what was happening there. I hurried to go there to take a look. I ran quickly. To my surprise, there was a girl sitting in the street. The girl with a school bag was about 17 years old. There was also a piece of paper in front of her. It said, “…my family don’t have enough money for me to go to school…”
I was very sad to see that. I couldn’t help giving some money to the girl. The girl was very grateful to me. She said, “Thank you!” I was glad to do it. Then I went away with a smile.
That day I had a dream in the evening; I dreamt that I had a lot of money. I did a lot of wonderful things. I helped the poor and the old.
After the dream, I know that we should be kind to others. If they are in trouble, we will try to help them out of trouble. Then we will feel very happy and we will think everything is beautiful. Then we will have a nice life. Dear friends, try to be a kind person, the world will be nicer and nicer.

追问

- -太长了啊，我只是初三的 要求80个词左右，，帮忙减少点。求精啦

追答

Trying to help others
Last Sunday, I went to the supermarket to buy things, suddenly found that there is a person in the supermarket.
As I got closer to see, he is a beggar, not lower limbs, the hair also is very chaotic......
I see very sad, and then take out 10 yuan of money into his bowl.
He supinely begin, grateful to say to me: "thank you."

这个呢？
还有这个的修改版（其实也没增么修改，就是把后面的减去了！）

Trying To Help Others
Last Sunday, I went to Haimen to go shopping. I saw a lot of people standing in front of the supermarket when I was walking down the street.
I wondered what was happening there. I hurried to go there to take a look. I ran quickly. To my surprise, there was a girl sitting in the street. The girl with a school bag was about 17 years old. There was also a piece of paper in front of her. It said, “…my family don’t have enough money for me to go to school…”
I was very sad to see that. I couldn’t help giving some money to the girl. The girl was very grateful to me. She said, “Thank you!” I was glad to do it. Then I went away with a smile.