Question

跪求英文高手帮忙翻译两句英文，最好能正式一些，因为是给签证官看的，不要机译哦！感激不尽！

内容：因为XXX所持港澳通行证的有效期至2012年6月29日，届时需要持护照方可进出澳门，因此，恳请签证官先生能够尽快处理王晓彤的签证事宜，以便她能够尽快拿到护照，进行她在澳门的高中学业。

Answer 1

Since Wang Xiaotong's travel permit expires on 29 June 2012, she must have her passport ready for Macao entry later on. Please kindly proceed with Wang's visa application as quickly as possible, in order she has timely access to the passport needed for her school study there. (Your assistance is much appreciated.)
最后括号中内容是建议加入的，这样比较完整和礼貌。

Answer 2

As the Passport of *** will expire on 29th June 2012 and she must take the passport to enter Macau at that time, so it would be greatly appreciated if you can process her visa as soon as possible to enable her to get the valid Passport for her high school study in Macua.

Answer 3

As the Passport validity of *** will be due on 29th June, 2012, which the owner will be reuqested new Visa to enter/Exist Macao by then, hereby we kindly request to process Visa of Wang Xiaotong as soon as possible, enable her to get the visa on time and continue her course in school

Answer 4

For the reason that the valid period of Hongkong&Macao laissez-passer is end at 29th June in 2012,I need to get the admittion to Macao with passport at the appointed time .Please visa officer can deal with the matter of visa of wangxiaotong as soon as posible.So that she can get the passport earlier to achieve her study in Macao.